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Timing is Everything

Here is story start. Or maybe this is a complete flash fiction story. Either way, another look at the “clutter in the attic” of my writer’s mind. I hope you enjoy.

Author Kris Endicott

Timing is Everything – A Flash Fiction Story

Bette hefted the last bag of compost into the back of her ten-year-old SUV. In the first year after He Who Shall Not Be Named had left her for that young tart, Bette had torn into the backyard and expanded the flower bed until there was very little grass remaining. The strenuous work of turning over and loosening the hard-packed clay, that the housing developer had hidden under a skinny layer of topsoil, had provided her with a legal way to beat something to a pulp. The calluses on her hands were proof that she’d enjoyed that part of the job.

Ignoring the ripe smell of both her purchase and herself from the hard work, the loyal weekly customer of Bell’s Garden Center hitched up her baggy gardening pants and made a mental note to add another new hole to her old leather belt to keep them up.

That was one thing she hadn’t expected when she had thrown herself into remaking the yard. She had hoped and prayed it would exhaust her enough that she could sleep at night. Let her dog-tired body demand sleep so her mind couldn’t spend hours reliving all the failures of her marriage. But to her surprise, she had also lost the thirty-five pounds she always said she would get to.

In the last few months, the deep-seated need to pound the soil into submission had finally faded. Perhaps that was because she now had the beautiful garden she’d always thought was only in magazines. Or maybe, she’d finally exorcised all her demons.

Either way, this would be her last trip to the garden center for a while. She was ready to be sociable again. She was starting with a trip into the city to see a play.

Bette was excited to wear the new form-fitting dress she’d splurged on and have a night out. She had avoided going downtown all this time for fear of running into him. The city had always been his playground.

Now, she was ready. She knew if he saw her in that dress, he would regret ever leaving her. Then she would have the satisfaction of dumping him.

But before she could shower and change, Bette needed to unload the bags of compost back home. She slammed the car’s back gate and slipped her work gloves into her back pocket. She ran her hands through her sweat-drenched hair and twisted it up off her neck into a disheveled knot.

With one hand flapping the damp t-shirt away from her sweat-soaked body, Bette rounded the car and almost stepped on a pair of men’s Italian loafers that appeared in front of her. She recognized that brand and style. Without raising her eyes, she inhaled the familiar woodsy scent over the rank smell of the compost.

She closed her eyes and shook her head. Why now?

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Time Blast

I‘ve been experimenting with story openings. Not sure if this will turn into a larger story but thought you might enjoy peeking into the “clutter in the attic” of my writer’s mind.

Author Kris Endicott

Time Blast – A Story Snippet

Ben awoke to the faint smelled of the cheese snacks he’d had an hour before and the contoured edges of the nav station buttons pressed against his cheeks. He wasn’t wearing his four-point harness and yet was still sitting in his chair. Good. That meant the artificial gravity was still working.

With deliberate care, Ben sat up and rubbed his steady hands over his face. The scratching sound of day-old stubble made him believe he wasn’t dreaming. But beyond that, rubbing his eyes didn’t help. He still couldn’t see.

The aging engineer tried to focus both his eyes and his mind. His last memory had been the blaring of the proximity alarm that made his ears want to bleed. He had yelled to Megan, the young pilot fresh out of the academy, asking if she saw the ship the instruments said was on top of them. Then there had been a blinding flash of light. That was all he remembered before waking up with his upper body draped over the useless console that hadn’t warned them in time.

Faint pinpoints of glowing blue lights from the familiar state-of-the-art board in front of him pierced the darkness of his vision. Ben pushed himself up by the edge of the console, careful to favor his bad knee. Only, his knee didn’t protest. In fact, he found standing up to be easier than it had been in years.

The space veteran leaned forward until he could read how many life signs were onboard the ship. Only two.

He needed to check on his pilot. Ben’s hand smacked the cold metal of the young woman’s chair. She wasn’t in the seat although the safety harness, she habitually wore even on calm treks like this had been, was pulled taut away from the seatback.

He heard a caught breath, a whimper, then the silence was pierced by a primal screech that sent a bolt of adrenaline through his system that the previous events hadn’t.

With his vision returning, Ben saw Megan’s clothes puddled in her chair. What sent terror spiking down his spine was the toddlerwith Megan’s eyes staring back up at him from that clothes pile.

The old man’s gaze was caught by his own hand suspended over the child’s head. He stared in disbelief as he flexed smooth fingers unbent by arthritis. 

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